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drummerboy678 Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 134 |
Yeah, I wrote a poem about a hangnail. Kinda dumb, I know. Any comments would be appreciated though... this is just a silly one, not the typical serious poems I'm used to. Your origin is usually a mystery: a stubbed toe, a sidetracked nail biter, condemnation from the nail gods. Yet whatever the cause, there you dangle, tortuously hanging onto the edge of the cliff with your undecided clasp, grasping for life, knowing that once you fall, you die. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
kinda funny cause nails aren't even alive anyway...lol well...interesting man, definately. |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
haha interesting topic. I liked it, it was a break from the usual things on this forum. I especially liked the "nail gods" part. Well keep it up, I really like your poems! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Yeah....I liked it because it wasn't the average, serious poem. Cute topic!  ~Alli~ |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
lol cute. did you jnow there is actully a band called hangnail? ~*~Robin~*~ hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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