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Teen Poetry #7

Catalyst (Updated Again and Finally Finished)

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2004-06-04 12:49 PM

Graduation has come and gone
emotions spent.

Time to celebrate,
too lost in the cliché
of goodbye
to drink to the night,
so here’s to you and all your lies.

As I watch you sitting on the patio
lost in the drunken release of freedom,
I begin to miss what I never had.

*Once again random thoughts, no structure, no pretense . . . Suggestions welcome*

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

1 posted 2004-06-04 09:23 AM

Really i havent got what u mean exactlly,,try rearrange it...it maybe gives another clear meaning

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-07-01 07:42 PM

I got exactly what you said ,,i love it ,,keep posting..

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

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