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The Lover's Tears
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The Lover's Tears |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
The Lover's Tears The lover's tears are endless of tears, are may hurt are may wound, but are glisten in the sky like a stars you'll never see them, but you will feel are a tears of silence, are not ended, but are hurting more than the clear tears fall on the face the heart is stop walking, just walking where? nowhere, it doesnt know may another place of tears of big silence and more inside tears the lover's tears are wounded and hurted but become more sweet when i had back to my hurter one word she said, SORRY, made me life and alive no words no tears, just a sielnce of death are the the tears you will never see but you will feel I LOVE YOU with my tears inside [This message has been edited by Rommance_Touch (06-02-2004 08:33 PM).] |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
the grammar mistakes made this close to unreadable. you need to go back and edit it so i can actually understand what you are saying. |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Yes I agree, it was very hard for me to read as well. Im sure it would be a great poem if you fixed the errors... |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
IM so pleasure there are a good PPl inform me and not just left without a comment, soooo thx i hope now be readable thx again ~~~LOVERS OF POEMS~~~~ |
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