Teen Poetry #7 |
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say this to me |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain ![]() |
v.1 tonight the sky looks darker than ever like the stars are hiding from my view i'm lying under them, wondering if maybe your missing me too i can't think of a more perfect person to give a piece of my heart just give me your word that you'll never break me or tear us apart ch. you'll have to make me a promise that you can keep with words like forever the two of us will be i never want you to make me cry promise you won't make me shed a tear just look in my eyes say you'll always be here v.2 i want you to be here with me to comfort me on these lonely nights hold me close to you make everything be alright ch. no matter what i'll always love you i swear |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Wow I really liked this. Very good, I love the way you described how you want his promise to mean something. I liked it alot, bood job!@ "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wowow amazinggg.keep it upp..love and respectt I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!! |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Very sweet! I like it a lot. Great Work! |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
I think it's sweet. Kinda romantic ![]() Loved it...! - Fleur - |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
thank you all no matter what i'll always love you |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Very nice, i can hear it allready ![]() |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful...... i love the emotion and i can definitly hear this one on the radio some time..... keep it up... Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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