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lovergirl
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since 2003-08-18
Posts 12


0 posted 2003-10-22 05:57 PM


I can't say what I want to say.
I'm holding it in day by day.
I'm trying but I can't get a chance.
I'm trying to say it but I just can't.
I want to say I love you,
But I just can't say the truth.
I guess I'm shy. I guess I'm scared.
I guess I didn't know how much I cared.
But now I'll say it. I love you.

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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-22 06:43 PM


hmmmm, yes a word not to be taken lightly.  short and sweet.  good job
Silent Evincar
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since 2003-07-22
Posts 179
Here There and Places Between
2 posted 2003-10-22 09:49 PM


Three little words that light the external and eternal flame of eternity and possibly set forth the motion of bliss. Yes, sometimes we just don't know or don't want to. Beautiful and to the point.

       NJS

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