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Teen Poetry #7

Telephone Call

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-10-17 03:38 PM

I wait for a call that I know will not come
Just because it kills me not to.
For, if I lose hope, I know it is over
And I really do not want it to end.

Everytime the phone rings, I run to answer
And sure enough, it's never you.
I guess all this praying that we'll speak again
Is just a dream to keep myself going.

Maybe, in time, your voice will be on the other line
But right now it's inevitable that it won't.
So all I can do is just try to let go...
...maybe I'll just take the phone off the hook...*

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-17 05:08 PM

you write the thoughts of my mind.

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

2 posted 2003-10-18 09:44 AM

I recall moments like this, last night for instance... after awhile you just end up sleeping with that phone. How much running can you actually do when there's nothing left on the other line?? Just a thought, and this was excellent... no negatives from me.

NJS

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

3 posted 2003-10-22 08:40 PM

I read this before...but I haven't for a while. I liked this one...I thought it was very original. Nice job. Loves.

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

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