can you just give me a chance?

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Teen Poetry #7

can you just give me a chance?

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-20 08:41 PM

How xan i face you and tell you i need something?,
when your alwayz screaming,yelling mad ??

How do you expect me to open my heart?,and tell you everything i did ?

I wish i can just face you and tell you i love you but it never works,

I wanna get along with you love you and ttrust you,but why are you like that?

Each time i say something its just not real for you,me and you are alwayz arrguing ,i wish just one day with no more turning faces on each other,

JUst understand me ,,im going through a hard age and i need you here with me ,to understand what im going through ,,

ell no matter how much i speak you will never understand i guessss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

1 posted 2004-07-07 05:33 PM

"Just understand me ,,im going through a hard age and i need you here with me ,to understand what im going through"

that was my favorite line of the whole thing, good write keep it up.

~*.:Leah:.*~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-07-10 11:58 PM

hmmm...I see a few spelling errors, but the overall poem is very good. Nice job

~Alli~

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