Knocking and knocking , LET ME IN "please?"

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Teen Poetry #7

Knocking and knocking , LET ME IN "please?"

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-19 12:10 PM

Knocking ,and knocking
On your heart,can you let me in?,

You have been part of my skin,
LeT me in ?

i want to begin on loving you more.
i want you to give me the chance for me to tell you so ..

OPEn the door let me in,please,
Dont make me feel like i have to freeze,..
and die in those seas,,

Seas that are full of nothing but a saulty sea..
i wanna feel free ,GIve me your key ,

AM i asking for too much ?
Just give me the touch of happiness and peace,,

but be nice,i just want alittle piece,
i dont want a release,

I think ,im just dreaming soo let me wake up and tell you that """IM NEEDING YOU""""!!

LET ME IN .!!! please

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-19 12:23 PM

Very cute! I really like it a lot...
Keep it up girly.
awesome!

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