Teen Poetry #7 |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world ![]() |
Friends should never hurt, friends should never lie, but you've broken both these things, you have made me cry. Not tears of happiness, not tears of joy, not even tears of something happening with a boy. Tears over hate and sorrow built up inside. Things you never told me, things you decided to hide. I find out everything that you have to say, shaking, crying, choking, how could you hurt me this way. We were supposed to be each other's best friend, the one person I could trust, even to the end. But your words have stung my heart my trust in you is gone, I can't believe you're the person, I trusted so long. I can't stop crying now, the tears keep coming back, it's a never ending stream of something I now lack. I still can't believe you would hurt me so bad, I'm sorry this had to happen, I'm sorry we lost part of what we had. -Erin I got a horrible email from my best friend and it really upset me, I couldnt' stop crying so I wrote this, I feel alittle better now. Sorry, pretty much venting..hope you like it. "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
i like this. im so lucky that this hasnt happened between my frind and i. im sorry to hear it did happen to you "What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing." |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wow woow wow ...awesome keep it upp..i love ur poemsss soooooo more......love and respect sis peace I will cover you with my blood,not only because |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I know what you mean.. she must have wrote some horrible things. I am sorry for what you have loset, but atleast now you now. kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
the saem thing happened to me but i found out at school from someone i dint even know saying are you the chick thats fighting ..... today....????? so yeah that was pretty bad... but i love the way you have got your emotions out here and i hope you can work it out with your friend... keep up the writing even if its venting keep it up. Nice work... Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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