Teen Poetry #7 |
This World... |
tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
What has this world come to, what have we become? Cheaters, liers, people of which there is no sum. People today have no morals in life, They do what they can so that only they can survive. I look over at people notice them cheating off me, How can they do this, why can't they see? Our world today is so fake and so unreal, it's lost it's truth, it's lost it's appeal. There's a lack of decent people now, now that we've lost all respect or just forgotten how. This world is full of so much darkness, people who don't believe who's faith is so much less. I'm not saying I'm perfect, that I'm not to blame, for everyone has had a part with how the world became. -Erin This is a poem on how the world is just so full of lies and cheating, I noticed it today when taking a test and it just really upset me.Hope you like it and let me know what you think! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86 |
Much Enjoyed! I agree, sometimes there seems like there is no hope for society. I'm not saying I'm perfect, that I'm not to blame, for everyone has had a part with how the world became. Def. Enjoyed that part the most. Keep it up!! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wowwowowow...awesome enjoyed it keep it upp.. I will cover you with my blood,not only because |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I agree with both of the replys. GREAT JOB!!! |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
I agree with you Erin. Loved your poem!! Great job! |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Wow thanks you guys! I'm glad you liked it. Sorry if it was kind of venting! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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