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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-05-05 10:33 AM

Dearly beloved
we are gathered here today
to send this man away
all the times
he got burned
were lessons
he should have learned
Going through his life
holding a grudge
with that fatal mistake
he became his own judge
Dealing with his problems
with so much fury
he also became
his own jury
Thinking no one could match him
with his cunning and wit
he gave up his last
and final chance to acquit

Now the executioner

By the power vested in me
By God and this man's choices
I now pronounce him
a wasted life

I can't believe thsi is how I died...

I wrote this during the past few months while I was in jail...you'd be suprised the things you come up with in there. Anyways for those of you that remember me I'm back now and I'll be posting more.

-"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit"
-"A Poet Is Born, Not Made"

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-05 06:06 PM

This is very interesting...But I like it!
Good Job!
Keep it up

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

2 posted 2004-05-05 08:20 PM

I was on this website a lot last year, then i kind of forgot about it for a while, and now i'm back on pretty often again... but i recognized your name and i remembered you were one of my favorite poets before

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2004-05-05 09:47 PM

Yes, I remember you. I always read your poety even if I didn't post a response. lol But this poem was really good. It's going in my library! Good job! ~Jess

"Hopeless romantics are only hopeless in the eyes of those who don't believe in romance." -Unknown

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

4 posted 2004-05-05 09:56 PM

wow this one wAS VERYY EXCITING TO READ...KEEP IT UPP

PEACE LOVEZZ

ConfsdFreek911
New Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 9

5 posted 2004-05-07 12:49 PM

I really really enjoyed your poem, it is very sad for me because it reminds me of my brother...but i really liked it. keep it up

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

6 posted 2004-05-07 12:54 PM

wow... Incredible... well, welcome back then..

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

7 posted 2004-05-07 01:08 PM

POA Vary Vary nice to see you again(I like it when people come back here), this place definitely isn't the same but it is the forums as you knew them. I really liked this poem it was a vary interesting read I like the transformation of wedding vows...grate job...keep writing

As darkness covers the land, the fun has just begun

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

8 posted 2004-05-07 04:23 PM

I liek this a lot, i like the whole jury, jusdge thing you had going on. I am sorry you were in jail, and i bet you came up with a lot of good stuff while you were in there. I am not sure if it is my place to ask why you were there in, and if it isnt you do not have to answer, but i just thought i would ask. And you are not a wasted life.. everyone swcrews up in life, dont worry about it.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Censored
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

9 posted 2004-05-07 10:51 PM

awesome poem!

Defective
Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 73
Salisbury NC

10 posted 2004-05-10 11:27 PM

It takes a very talented writer to come up with a metaphor such as this. Awesome.

LucidityNow
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 118
Canada

11 posted 2004-05-11 06:55 AM

I remember you from 2001

welcome back. I havent been here for years either until just recently. Great poem to start off with.

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

12 posted 2004-05-11 08:36 PM

I, too, have been gone for some time, and this was the first poem I clicked on, and I'm glad I did, because this was completely awesome. It's going in my library, well done.

It's been awhile,since I've seen the way, the candles light your face. It's been a while, but I can still remember just the way you taste! ~StainD

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

13 posted 2004-05-15 06:56 PM

Very good job, nice write.

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

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