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I miss you, my love
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I miss you, my love |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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This is for my love, (heheh hence the title), I didn't get to talk to him tonight, (first night in a long time, I don't see him, it's a internet relationship, I love him more than anything and I missed him so much tonight so I wrote this. Let me know what you think and thanks to those of you who've replied to my other poems! I'm really glad you liked them! I miss you, my love... Tears spring to my eyes, My heart, slowly tearing apart, My stomach crunching up, Away from this pain I wish I could dart. I miss you, my love, Your words I need to see, I need proof that your real, Proof you won’t leave me. I miss you, my love, Your kind and respect. The last few day’s without you, Have been like heck. I miss you, my love, Your humor I miss, too. Without you to make me laugh, I’m unsure of what to do. I miss you, my love, And the riches of your smile, Making my heart melt, And left in a pile. I miss you, my love, And the confidence you give, You make me so happy, You make me want to live. I miss you, my love, No one else could compete, You are my love and I miss you, With you I am complete. -Erin "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
omg lololol...i like it but at the same time ,,,i did not agree with it lolol..,,i felt like im reading something that really does not exist ,,im sorry sis....but i dont actually agree with internet relationships ever .....i dont think they last ever in life,,i ttried it once and im not ready to try it again after they show u love they leave u with nothing but an empyt heart sis believe me...well great job anywayz,,im not trying to be rude...lolol,, love and respect... peace I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die... |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Hey, Nice One, it liked me, A love is exist anywhere in the world via phone, in street, or beside a home,,,but where is the honest person...Keep touching him as he touched yr heart...and be sure he is a trustable person..and he is goin to do what he have to do to finally sleep like a baby bet yr arms. a love via is amazing, but take care not all hearts are pure... i dont know what to say, i tried it, or im trying it,,,i think its hanging,,,but for my sorrow,,,its with someone,,,fight herself,,,fight a love,,,although she writes a poems which is a yield of a feelings, and yr hands move to write yr poems...its an expression,,,i dont taste a poems,,, just for writing with no sense,,,or something we feel,,,but to let ppl rate it... Finally,,,i hope he be a trustable and good guy deserve yr love.... ~~~Rommance_Touch~~~ ~~Not_Ended~~ |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
Time, place, religion, or anything else isn't and can not ever be a hindrance to love. Internet relationships do exist, as long as you love eachother. You have to fight for the love. - Your poem was very touching, Tapper! Loved iT! -Fleur- |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Thank you for your replies! SWEET, I have to disagree with you on internet relationships. I have known him since last summer and I was just friends at first but we both liked each other. He's looking at colleges here, or near here and I love him so much. I don't know if it will work but with God's will, I'm sure love can work in many ways, including internet relationships. But thank you for your reply and I'm glad you shared your opinion with me, it's always nice to hear someone elses opinion! Take care! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
lololol..sis ...yea yea im sure ....but i just cant agre ever i dont know why i just cant feel it.....well ur welcome sis ..love and respect I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die... |
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