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sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-10 04:38 PM

FRIENDs for life,
even if we were killed by a knife,

you were here when i needed you ,
You were here when i had a flu,
you were here when i was so blue,

You turned me new.
by being so true.

dont you dare to leave ME.
after all these years that i spent just wondering about this relationship we had,has been growing like a tree.

you are everything ,
Like a ring ,
that i cant ever take offin the winter or spring.

yoU were here in good and bad,even when i felt like i did not need you ,
but who can you be?

if i only can thank you,
but how can that be?

its impossible to thank a person like you,
because me and you are never going to be through.

even if it came to death.
because its just a breath.

that cant ever be denied.
even if we died .

i know you would try.
to keep me up the sky.

and i cant ever deny.

so lets enjoy life now before its time to die..

even though i deny..

A Friend's love says:
" If you ever need anything,
I'll be there."

True Love says:
" You'll never need anything;
I'll be here."

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-10 04:44 PM

I like it, I think you have a very interesting style! Great Job!!! Keep it Up!!!

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

2 posted 2004-05-10 05:34 PM

Hello, SWEET how r u. nice to hear a poems of u again...yr poems like a flow of river in my blood...it departs me into a small hearts and there a big heart yr Poem is it, so clear 4 a view....

nice poem...Keep Writing

~~Rommance_Touch~~
~~G_W_5~~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-05-10 07:19 PM

Nice.....

~Alli~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

4 posted 2004-05-10 08:24 PM

oh thank u my both sisters for ur replies
Stepharoo,alli ,,i reallly appriecate it ..love and respect..

peace

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

5 posted 2004-05-10 11:21 PM

nice poem. i'm glad to see that your writing is really coming together. keep writing

nice use of muffin

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

6 posted 2004-05-12 09:49 AM

A sweet poem of our Sweetie... Great Poem sis..

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

7 posted 2004-05-12 11:42 PM

oh thank u alll with all my love and respectt..

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...
I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

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