Teen Poetry #7 |
you tricked me . |
sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
you tricked me with your lies, and your here because-? you tricked me with your big lies, you never even imagined if i hate you like now.. i told you we are not ment. but you just ignore than and went on. i hate you ,even though i dont know how strong that word means. i hate you so much that i cant even look at you. lying SOO Deep ,dont you get it? stop bothering me everywhere i go, in my dreams, in my wishes, in my hopes in everything i do, stop being so not real, your making everything so hard,, i cant complete my dreams if you are here. i cant wish when you are by me. i cant hope when you are around ,im so hopeless when your around. and even in my own dreams you dont leave me alone, when i get to the good part,you just appear.. dont you get it ,i dont have anything for you,,because im dead,... ONCE A TRICKER ALWAYZ A PRE-TRADER peace lovezz |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
hi,,nice story,,,its so clear yr in love or at least care abt him, he is in yr dreams, he in every way yr... its a life, What We Love Isnt Easy To Get, maybe we fight and get it and maybe we fight and become more lovely for him i hope fluer, c that and comment ~~Rommance_Touch~~ ~~G_W_5~~ |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
Just my words... He's everywhere but still so far away... Liked it, sis... Keep it up! Your write is amazing.. |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
huh???....i dont get it ,im soo confused....omg...what ?,what? what??? ...whatever.... peace A Friend's love says: |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
I thought it was really good. I really liked the part where you said they were with you everywhere, in your dreams, ect. That was good, you brought out alot of emotions like angry, and hate(heheh hate's all over it!) in this one and I really liked it. Good job. "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice poem....really enjoyed it. Keep up the writing... (And pretty soon you could make a book of poetry!) ~Alli~ |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
lolololol.....admit it sis i write alottt...haha....well thank u all for ur replies,,,sis i know i write too much and even soo wild lolol...welll love and respect.... peace I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die... |
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