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Teen Poetry #7
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TheGirlNoOneKnew
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since 2003-12-04
Posts 92
PA, USA
0 posted 2004-05-07 09:45 AM

Paper cuts, jagged edges
razor sharp
your words prick my soul.

Oozing blood, colors of red wine
beautiful seduction
take me, take me
away.
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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
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1 posted 2004-05-07 07:59 PM

hmmm... short but sweet.. in a morbid way. ~lol~

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling
Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
2 posted 2004-05-07 09:19 PM

Hmmm I am a little confused by this one...
I dont know what else to say other than,
keep up the good work!
Censored
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 86
3 posted 2004-05-07 10:48 PM

I really liked this. It was short, but amazing.  
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