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Nothing But A Memory
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Nothing But A Memory |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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Nothing But A Memory The fire's ablaze smoke fills the air it's awfully calm for my racing heart Amidst the shadows lies a box intimate moments have become foreign Its contents dripping streams of love rivers of need and oceans of lies My hands are shaking as they fall into the depths of no longer Mascara tears drip onto vows of love and forever finds its fiery death As they turn to ashes i exhale... i'm turning you into a memory nothing but a memory --Just in case you didn't follow this. It's about me burning a box of letters, pictures, cards, etc. of an ex. Just a little fyi if you needed some help  **You can't always trust the people you want to** [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (05-07-2004 06:01 AM).] |
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ConfsdFreek911 New Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 9 |
wow...that was really intense, very good! i have a box of an ex but i don't think i'd ever get the courage to burn it |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
Wow, what can I say? this really reminds me of my ex bf. I had a file I had done about the two of us and what we had done as a couple. But when we broke up I had forgotten about it until a few months ago, and when I found it I had to get rid of it...and that was hard. great job!!! |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Good write, I can def relate to what you were saying here. Great word usage! ~Jess  "Hopeless romantics are only hopeless in the eyes of those who don't believe in romance." -Unknown |
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