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Teen Poetry #7

If you only understood what made you special...

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-07 12:38 PM

If you only understood what made you special,
If you only understood what i ment by loving you,

If you only understood what you ment to me,
If you only understOOD the smile i had toward you,

If you only asked and cared,
If you only tried and pretend,

Youran away like ,i ran away from spiders,
You ran away like ,i ran away from riders..

I wish i never gave you what i had,
I wish i did not fall for your jokes and lies..

LOOKING at me with your big eyes .
scaring me with you tearing lies.

I GAVE,you stole,
i gave ,you control.

BUT I dont feel bad for giving you my love ,because
LOVE IS NEVER A PAINLESS Feeling..

But if you only understand what you ment ...

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-07 12:43 PM

this is a poem i wrote like 2 hours ago,,im sorry about the mistakes,,my problem is i just start to type soo fast and as im typing i just goo to fast and forget some words,,,believe me i know my mistakes im soo sorry ..but i just dont pay attention while im writting i hope u get me ..loolol..thanks again lovezz

***peace***

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-05-07 03:54 AM

we all make mistakes. your poems are much easier to read now..
keep up the good work girlie

TheGirlNoOneKnew
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since 2003-12-04

Posts 92
PA, USA

3 posted 2004-05-07 10:09 AM

"Love is never a painless feeling"

I loved that line, it's so true. Keep up the good work!

Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

4 posted 2004-05-07 11:11 PM

that was really sweet, i liked it!

Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

5 posted 2004-05-07 11:17 PM

very cute!

drummerboy678
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since 2003-10-28

Posts 134

6 posted 2004-05-07 11:34 PM

Great job, especially on the formatting and spelling. I guess I should have looked at the name, and thought that maybe english wasn't your first language.

Your doing tremendously well for speaking four.

Keep up the good work.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

7 posted 2004-05-07 11:54 PM

lolol...thanks u alll ,,,im trying cant u seee??..hahaha..well cya yea

peace...

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