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Time went by! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
Time went by, and all i could remember is your smile. Your smile that kept me alive ,till the day i HAVEdied. i died in your feelingS that showed nothing but a lie. You taught me how life goes and showed me that im not here alone. BUT I DIED and you are still alive, when i appeared you just went with not even a word of saying goodbye. i was going to die , but than i got dry from the blood you gave my heart. i thought i lived in your world's art. in a picture you drew that showed our chart. my heart melted and your games are forgotten. I DIED in your dreams left alone with no place to go.. BUT NOW im here to say i will not say in the gray .but i will live for my name.. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I HOPE YOU LIKE IT ,I WROTE it just now ,its new i want to know what you think ,remember truth does not hurt...lol. lovezzz ***peace*** |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
It was okay. It wasnt ur best, but it was okay. and i must disagree with the "truth does not hurt thing you wrote. I think it hurts very much sometimes. kissa_bear I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
lololol...,sis.. yea i know .......loev hurts and people hurt ..i guess thats life and it will never end..thanks for ur honesty and replies ,it really showed me something..well thanks again ...lovezz ***peace*** |
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