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A Moment
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A Moment |
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SixtiesChick03 Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 49NV |
There is a moment, An incredible fraction of time, When I look at you, and everything feels right. In this moment everything is clear, and the world falls away. I fall in love with you then, and sometimes it's hard to breathe. A look in your eyes makes my heart skip, The feeling of your gentle breath on my cheek, The way your arms feel around me, and the way I can sometimes feel your heartbeat melting into mine, All of these are the moments that I live for. These moments that I fall for you again and againm and long to never leave you. These are the only moments a prayer finds my lips, A prayer that we will never lose each other. I have never needed someone so much, Never has anyone captured my heart this was, I live to touch you, to be close to you, The feeling of emptiness is almost to much when we're apart. My heart and soul burn for you, The need for your company is almost unbearable. Dreaming of the days we can be together makes it worse, The dreaming makes it feel as is if it will never come. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I liked this one, but not as much as ur others. It didnt seem to flow as well. It was still good though. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I have to say love poems aren't really my favorite. But I really like this one alot! Excellent job here, good feelings. Thanks for sharing. W.W. |
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