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Starry Night
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Starry Night |
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Whitehowl Junior Member
since 2003-10-14
Posts 10 |
The most pleasurable and enchanting night Was planned earlier in the daytime Got the ring so I eagerly wait the anticipation Seemed endless but the knock brought me back to reality Opened up and in came the most gorgeous gem Jaw hit the floor from the dazzling beauty Tripping over ones feet from my staring fixed eyes Get set and head out into the shady dark night Walked arm to arm under the vivid moon light Back at the household, things aren't so good But once you out, focused on the one and only You and me, more sweeter than gold itself Cherish every minute with you hoping things will change Took you anywhere you wished to be Into the open caged field, layed down and peer upwards Head to head on our backs between both goal posts Your sparkling eyes pointed out certain stars Might be me but swearing I saw your face in the midst of them Everything glistened in the silence of the night Exchanged memories and forgot about the crushing cold The touch from you is hair-rising, just astounding Leaned your head on me and rested your arm over me Comforted you back held you close The touch of your hair is remarkable The smell of you is sensational The everything of you is breathtaking We lay there watching the moon and its chums Never wanting this miraculous time to end Thank you for this pleasurable and enchanting night |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
ahhh yes....the better times eh.... good write |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
The sensual evening filled with romantic sensations. Yes, none of us want that tiny clock in the back of our minds to work. This was a soothing piece, it brought out peace when it is read. NJS |
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