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Every time before I fall asleep
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Every time before I fall asleep |
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Barbara Junior Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 32 |
A long month has passed, and I`m still not fine. I havent found myself yet. All this days, they`ve been so hurtful, and pain was stronger with every look. It didn`t stop! I`m still holding you tight right here in my heart.. and I wish, I`d hold you in my arms. Maybe this is the hardest truth, I ever had to realize. Maybe I don`t want to realize Maybe I don`t have to know it. Deep there, in the middle of my heart, just where you are sleeping. I don`t want to wake you up, `cause you will go. And so my mind will crushed, and my heart will die. I will be blind for other love just like I am now.. All this days I see you.. Oh, I see you every day, you`re on a school hall. There are so many people that pass me by, but I hope you`ll stop.. I hope you`ll stop me and tell me again that you love.. just one kiss... please... All I wish is for you to hold me tight again and whisper in my ear.. But this is only an ilusion, a precious ilusion that my heart makes every night, before I fall asleep.. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This poem was absolutely beautiful! I am VERY speechless right now. Great work! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
sniffle sniffle..... |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Touching, it puts that pit in the bottom of your stomach and brings forth of a sore heart. This piece has a visual that's easy to follow as well. Very enjoyable. NJS |
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