navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » sweet kiss.....
Teen Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic sweet kiss..... Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
red_angel*16
Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71


0 posted 2005-10-01 06:15 AM



wen u kissed me that nite
i felt like ive seen da light
your lips pressed against mine
felt like ive lost trackof time
your sincere lips im longing to kiss
your sense of touch &&
sweet smell im going to miss ,
a luv so deep dat can neva break
just one kiss can forever hold your sake
an ever lasting love,i hope will neva end
cuz for u i'll let my heart unbend
just a sweet kiss from yooh can make me go crazy and insane
my love for u will always stay the same
jes remember i lvu yooh ....

© Copyright 2005 red_angel*16 - All Rights Reserved
AtLsHawTy17
Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60
IL,
1 posted 2005-10-19 06:09 PM


i like it, i really felt what u was trying to express good job

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » sweet kiss.....

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary