Palestine is what i call my earth!!!

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sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-02 02:32 AM

My land ,My land,My land

I Call earth.
i call it heaven's earth,

Palestine ,your the most special thing of all..
with your smell i feel soo alive,

going to the dead sea and swimming in your saulty water ,makes me feel like i want to cry ,

i want you back for me ,for my people ..and espcially for the world..
i want you back ,
what can i do?

your mountains are so high that i feel like i almost reached the sky.

your people are soo sweet that makes the earth a better tase..

your land is my blood that i cover with my life.
your smile is what i will never trade..

but what can i do??
i dont think killing people would help,,
would it??

what can i do to say your my land again..
i admit we are all human beings ,and i admit jews are too..

but dont we have to defend?
dont we have to fight?
as they do??

or is it when we denfend we are called murders??""
..but your colors is what i have for all the world..

i wish we could share it ,
as one ..but
we alll have no choice..we have different minds and different hearts..

but if it was for me..i would say your not only mine but your for all of the sweetest people on this earth...

i call you my land ,my heart,my blood..without you who can i be called??....

PALESTINE REMEMber one day i will call you my land..
and so all the people will do too..

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

1 posted 2004-05-02 02:54 AM

hey,
i really liked this, it's definetely the best one i've read from you so far. you see the israeli/palestinian conflict stuff on the news, but it's really interesting to get another opinion. i am glad you at least see the wrong in what your people do...and in what the others do to you. it's a crappy situation, and i hope it gets better. until then, it painted a nice picture of a country that sounds beautiful. thanks for sharing.

-bergundy-

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

2 posted 2004-05-02 10:42 AM

That was a very good poem, very imaginative and powerful. I love reading your poems, they always make me think!(something I don't tend to do enough!)But again, very good write!
-Erin

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-05-02 12:09 PM

oh thank you all some much...well i usuallly write what i feel,its really nice of you for replying thanks again....lovesss

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

4 posted 2004-05-03 02:21 PM

How the hell did we wind up like this?
Why weren't we able, to see the signs that we missed
And try turn the tables

-...how did we end up like this`? With war? Killing eachother everyday?

-Someday, everything will be allright.. you'll see... Just be patient, and some day you'll say; Palestine! My Land, my country...

-Peace-

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