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I Will Always Love You
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I Will Always Love You |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry 
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(This is just a quicky poem I just wrote in the last 10 minutes. I wrote it as a "letter" to give to the guy I like, even though I'll never be able to send it. Anyways...I know it's not that amazing or anything but it's what I'm feeling right now. Please Comment!!) I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU I get this funny feeling every time I look into your eyes. Even though I know it’s coming, it takes me by surprise. I begin to feel all bubbly and my heart skips a beat. No matter what I do or say, I get caught up in the heat. I don’t know if when you look at me you feel the very same way. But I’ll never stop caring about you, each and every day. I hope that sometime soon we can grow to be more than friends. But I don’t want to ruin our closeness – make it come to an end. So when you finish reading this, please think long and hard. Consider in what direction you want “us” to go toward. Just realize my words will always be true, And never forget that… I Will Always Love You |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wow...i actually loved it keep it upppppppppppppppppppppppp......gr88 poemm... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Thank you sooo much, sweet_cute_palestinian04. I appreciate that you always take the time to comment on my poems. I'm also gald that you loved it. Thanks again!!! ~Alli~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Alli -- I used to do that a lot, too, that is, to write letters and never send them. You did this in 10 minutes -- that's great. The poem was well put together and conveyed your thoughts so well! Enjoyed. ....jo |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Thanks Iliana...glad you liked it! Also, congrats again on getting 4000 posts!   ~Alli~ |
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southern sweetheart Junior Member
since 2003-12-28
Posts 18 |
this is super cute i kinda did this to someone a really good friend now the perfect boyfriend hehe its weird when you look back and are like dang i've always loved you but a good feeling too anyways great poem |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86 |
I really liked it! I loved the ending too... great work. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
This was a very sincere and heartfelt write. I enjoyed it quite a bit. The only thing i'm wondering is why you can't send it to that special someone. "It's so hot! Milk Was a Bad Choice" Ron Bergundy in Anchorman -John nice use of muffin |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
I LOVED it!!!!!!!!! Alli you're the greatest!!! xoxo Bailey |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
beautiful |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I did that. I carried around the note and eventually forgot about it. Then, one day, I reached in my coat pocket, and there it was. In a moment of courage, I gave it to her. It led to what was, perhaps, the most meaningful relationship of my life, even though it's over. So if you still have feelings for this person, then don't hesitate to give this to them. If he's not awed and feeling loved by the time he's done reading it, then he's an idiot, and not worth your time. It really is great! -Rich "I'm burning in the heavens, |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
I get this funny feeling every time I look into your eyes. Even though I know it’s coming, it takes me by surprise. favorite lines! woo Yeah, well I don't write notes alot BUT I do write poems about someone that I wish I had the guts to give but I don't. lol Nice write Alli, great job! AIM-blueyed angel940 |
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AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
I really liked this..I don't think i've read anything from you that i haven't liked, but i definitely can relate to this! Keep up the work "Don't gain the world and lose your soul, wisdom is better than silver or gold." |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
this is beautiful. you should post more often! |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Ive known my husband for years and this is exactly how I felt everytime I saw him. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Ive known my husband for years and this is exactly how I felt everytime I saw him. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I just saw that I forgot to thank people from months ago!  Jamie: Thanks for the reply!  Censored: Thank you for the reply! Sorry it took me so long to say thanks!  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
James: Thank you so much for taking the time to reply. I appreciate it! And for bumping this up after all this time! John: Well actaully, to answer you're question...look at the date I posted this. It was in April!  lol. Alot has happened since then. Um...I'll explain this in like 20 words or less. I never ending up giving him the poem but we did end up going out for five months. Not that long, but we're still REALLY good friends. It's like my favorite quote, "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." [This message has been edited by *Alli4000* (12-06-2004 07:13 PM).] |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Bailey: YOUR THE BEST! That's all i gotta say!  Lauren/Laura (Chris wont tell me which one you like better!): Thank you for the reply. I know you don't really come to pip that much so I'm really honored that you took the time to read and reply to my poem. Rich: Thank you so much Rich for the reply! I didn't end up giving it to him, but if you want to know what happened, in the quickie version (lol) go look to what I had replied to John's reply. Thanks again!  [This message has been edited by *Alli4000* (12-06-2004 07:16 PM).] |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Erin: Thank you Erin! You should really try giving your poem to that special someone...who knows what could happen? AllThatGlitters: Omg! That is like one of the nicest compliments I have ever gotten about my work! Thank you so much!  (good tears..lol.)Derrick: I know I should post more...but one thing is holding me back: writer's block.  I can write fine, I'm just having trouble coming up with new ideas. *sigh*Cloud: Glad you could relate! Post some more poems soon, k?  Thanks everyone for the comments!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
wow. rolls along pretty niftily. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
good read, thanks for sharing good to see you members having a friendship in Passions a couple years back teen poetry writers had the best friendships amongst each other nice to see it happening again |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Hey baby girl, I just want to tell you that guy is crazy not to choose the direction to be with you. I would love to be with you in a heartbeat. No matter what you always have me to talk to and i promise to be there always!! Hugs and kisses and I LOVE YOU ALWAYS!! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Joseph: Glad you think so!  Acies: I have met alot of great people here at pip. Not just people who are like "internet friends", but people who I have actually talked to on the phone. Some of the people who I've met and I are actually planning on meeting one day. This place is awesome! lol.  Chris: Luv ya too! Thanks again everyone!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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