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spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

0 posted 2004-04-29 09:30 AM

What instrument is this
That is always around
No matter where I go
This thing that keeps me grounded
With strings all golden brown
And when you try and cut them
They all make such a sound
They put you in a Hospital
And look you up and down
This thing is so confining
It will never set you free
Yet as I sit here pining
You just stare at me
This instrument's my body
I see it every day
I really just dont like it
And I don't care what you say
Some day i will escape it
And maybe you will see
That I really can make it
In this world quite happily

"don't like this world anymore. tried to run out the door. didnt work and now im on the floor. can you hear me? do you care? please help!!! "

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-04-29 04:19 PM

wow.. amazing i loved it. I know what you mean, and how you feel.
*I'm adding this.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-04-29 06:51 PM

Very powerful....I am going through these sort of feelings right now. You described it perfectly with such intensity. I loved it!

~Alli~

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

3 posted 2004-04-29 08:53 PM

i really like this...

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

4 posted 2004-04-30 09:16 AM

thanks guys and girls and possibly things. (lol) i showed it to someone yesterday and they said i had an intresting view of life. yeah.... they dont know the half of it.

"don't like this world anymore. tried to run out the door. didnt work and now im on the floor. can you hear me? do you care? please help!!! "

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2004-09-07 07:01 PM

no one should be a puppet or under anothers controll

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

6 posted 2006-02-19 09:23 AM

i was talking about myself

I am not alive. Just a shell mearly moving with what is left of a ghost. An echo I am whats left after the true thing has left.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

7 posted 2006-02-20 01:39 PM

wow i really like your writing its good and you shouldn't be being controlled by anyone or anything.. ever. I really like your writeing you could go far

Where your heart lays is where you belong.

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

8 posted 2006-02-20 02:37 PM

awesome-flows perfectly

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

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