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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-04-28 02:31 PM

I loved you once
with all my heart
but that love
was ripped apart

I gave you my all
everything I had
just to be left
lonely and sad

Now theres a chance
to be with you again
a chance to go back
to what we had then

Sitting here reading
the things you said
with memories of you
running through my head

I just want to hold you
and feel you next to me
I want to give all my love to you
and know you'll never leave

-"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit"
-"A Poet Is Born, Not Made"

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-04-28 04:08 PM

wow...im saving this if u dont mind this is gr88 poem keep it upp

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-04-28 04:11 PM

amazing.. i luv it... Im saving... if u dont mind.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-04-28 04:23 PM

incredable poem....i lovd it!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-04-28 06:01 PM

so good to see you posting again Tony, and glad you could sign in under your 'Name'
I really enjoyed this...

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

Censored
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

5 posted 2004-04-29 10:48 PM

Cute

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

6 posted 2004-04-30 03:52 AM

I always liked your work. Simple but powerful, as usual. Once again, great job.

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

7 posted 2004-05-02 02:43 AM

aww, hey tony. what's up? i really liked this one...good job.

-bergundy-

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

8 posted 2004-05-02 10:51 AM

Very good one!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

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