How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » Slurred Goodnights
Teen Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic Slurred Goodnights Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
young_blood
Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
0 posted 2004-04-26 03:35 PM

Something glints in your eye
   (Is it a piece of glass?)
And I love those brown lakes.
   (I could drown in them forever)
And a shiver of goodnight
   (Spoken only from sunken ships)
Quivers on your lips,
   (What a wishful thought)
So i will settle your shaking.
   (My lips steady yours)
As your hand reaches for mine
   (Soft, smooth, and so sneaky)
I let a smile spill over my face.
   (Catch the overflow in your hands)
Kiss me one last time before I go
   (The last goodnight will stop short of completion)
© Copyright 2004 Alex Lewis - All Rights Reserved
Censored
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86
1 posted 2004-04-26 11:10 PM

Kiss me one last time before I go
   (The last goodnight will stop short of completion)

I love that line! nice write.
sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
2 posted 2004-04-27 12:07 PM

wow..i love it its gr88 keep it upp
young_blood
Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
3 posted 2004-04-27 02:02 PM

thank you both
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » Slurred Goodnights

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary