Teen Poetry #7 |
High School Lives |
greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny |
Life can be lived as a whole Life should be lived with compassion Without life people would not know what to do Some people play with models, and are nerds Some people play sports Some people are followers And some people are just plain ordinary good people who don’t fit in Those people are the most extraordinary people around Those people can do so much with there life They can do a little bit of everything but not everything as a whole Those people are the great people who you always want to be Those people don’t fit in to one specific “social group” in life But those people always find a good friend and live life happy and free Those people are the people that this world needs most Those are the people who I myself am a part of My friends and myself are people who know we are better than those high school punks But I know I am going to get through it alright And I know I live my life to the fullest and can achieve anything Life is a great thing If it is used right |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Keep your spirit....you have a lot to look forward to .... heres to brighter days and peaceful thinking.... Greeneyes~ Will the wind ever remember |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good onnnnneeeeeee. |
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rhyme time Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 13 |
an absolute great poem thank you for letting me read it |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Living the life of a "nomad" huh?? You know the person who's friends with a little bit of everybody in each group. I have to disagree though, not really having a place to fit in because your ordinary.... isn't that easy of a life. That's just personal experience. Other than that I agree with the concept and I enjoyed the piece. Looking forward to more. NJS |
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greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny |
hmm very good and very tough question to answer its not really being normal if you are in a big group and you dont fit in with them then you are not really normal to there group yes you may do some of the things they may do but not all of them like take jocks you may play a sport and yes you would fit in with the kids on your team but if you just like that sport and just play it then those kids are really going to fit in because most of the kids on that team are all around jocks who watch every sprt and play every game and know everyone in the majors and so on so i hope this answers your question if not let me know thanks |
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greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny |
if this doesent answer just let me know e-mail me or something |
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