Teen Poetry #7 |
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amidst falling asleep |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
disconnected. in this empirical maze; i fall asleep, obscured, confounded and disbelieved. |
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*Belabebeautiful*![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Nicely done, I sense a bit of termoil here. Very strong write for the length of it, I enjoyed it immensly. ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
though i'm probably getting a whole different thought from it than what you were thinking, and though it is so short, still i really liked this ![]() |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
It was short but you still were able to express your emotions. Nice job! ~Alli~ |
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