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Porchlit Goodnights
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Porchlit Goodnights |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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I just wrote this last night... Porchlit Goodnights The meloncholy moon sings to the blue, But the sky's darkness applauds no one. I hear the beauty flittering in the wind And I wish upon unseen stars for all save one. A sigh from your lips replies to my kiss; Subtle flashes of moonbeams encore us on. You know the thought forming on my tongue So whisk it away with the most casual yawn. Once again I am caught in the repition of indecision, But grant me more wishes than stars above. Wait for tributes to pass before goodbyes exchange And the last brushes of skin push aside hesitant love. Don't say goodnight then... |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
intimate and beautiful. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Diddo. I loved it... |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
the poem is grand just like every other work that i've read of yours. good job |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you very much. i appreciate the comments. any one else? |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
Me! Me! Awesome job once again. I've run out of things to say =( But know that it was great and that i loved it. A life without love…is no life at all. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow... this was beautiful. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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