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Graduation |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
This is written for all the seniors out there who will be graduating this year. I hope you all enjoy it again the rhyming might sound forced a little but none the less i liked it. GRADUATION Here I stand in front of you The class of 2004 This is where an old life ends And a new one has begun Today we look at what was then And what is now For now you all start a new beginning Taking a look back on the thoughts that you had Noticing how much relationships have evolved Some have gotten closer And some have just dissolved This is the present That was the past Who likes whom now May or may not last Try not to forget these things And remember how you are today Know that you've made an impact In your own unique way You are all friends now That could possibly change People always drift apart And lives get rearranged The only things you can count on To last forever and a day are the memories that you've made They will always and forever stay No one can promise to always stick around Nobody can make forever last Everyone can always promise To never forget the past But so many changes have occurred With relationships starting And old friends parting Graduation may bring tears Of joy, relief, and pain But always remember The secrets and memories these halls still contain If the halls could talk They could gossip as much as you do About what's really going on with the students Like who's going out with who Sometimes you may forget The necessities of being a teen Like when your friend tells you not to do something Are they really being mean? Whether you've made someone smile Or made them cry You mean something to them And it doesn't matter that you may have to say goodbye There's just one last thing That I really want you to know Happy Graduation, and good luck No matter where you may go. |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
Wow! I'm a seniro and I totally loved this!! Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
I think that poem was great. As you know, I am a senior and that is all so true. I loved about the part if hallways could talk. I think that they know more than anyone does lol Great job....smile |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I'm not a senoir but if I was I think I would feel a lot like this. Very nice job! |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
EXCEELENT!!!! i love it... im graduating this year also and i wish the best fro everyone on the site who is also graduating....... excelent write... and the rhyming wasnt as forced as in some of your other poems. keep it up. Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Thanks for all the wonderful comments so far i thought it was a nice change from the typical love poems that i always write. Being a senior has so many good points but yet so many sad points. Hope you all have a wonderful senior year and good luck to you wherever u may end up and if at anytime u need a friend look me up by sending me an email at [email protected] or send me an aol instant message to the screen name chrissccr18. Thanks and enjoy any other poems i might write, Chris |
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