»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #7
»
Hopelessness Wonders
| Teen Poetry #7 |
|
Hopelessness Wonders |
|
|
Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
The way you look at me, The things you whisper in my ear... Sometimes allows me to fear, The end of you and I even coming near. Holding me in your arms, Seeing the expression of eternal adorement in your eyes. Slowly does it hurt me, To hide within my lies. How would life be, Without you there to complete me... Do you understand how I feel, Can't you look through me and see? Relying upon my patheticness, Bashes me to the edge of my own insanity, I cant stand it any longer. Emotions engraved into me, Retells how far my hopelessness can wonder... * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Delaniie Quirk - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
sweet!!!!!!!!!! |
||
|
Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Perhaps it isn't hopelessness but rather the strength that some aren't willing to set forward. What's commendable about this piece is that the problem is right in front of your face and the option is too painful. So we continue to wonder into hopelessness. Nice. NJS |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Great job on this, Delaney. You've expressed these feelings very well. I enjoyed the read. ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
