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Whitehowl
Junior Member

since 2003-10-14

Posts 10

0 posted 2003-10-15 11:58 PM

I dedicate this poem to a musician who was and still is a great inspiration to me, and also to music all together.

Not a whole lot of em in the world
But simply gracious when you meet one
Move your thoughts and ya heart
Close to heart like a best friend
My greatest lost his life to the game
The most sensational music that i ever heard
Grew up then noticed his grateful words
Never thought they'd hit me so hard

Your whole mood shifts completely
Hateful and sinister music makes you hate
Slow and peacful music makes you relaxed
Sad and sorryful music makes you down
Crazily weird how it changes you

Into the mix and depths of their lives
Wanna be more involved with their everyday strives
Help you get through painful messes
Always seem to have a shoulder to rely on
That extra hand to guide you through
When times are dark and distant
Some can shake you so far
Change your life to who knows how far

Best things in life to people
To me they are and I know that
Boosts up your confidence and faith
Be determined to be what you want
Best things in life are inspirations

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-17 02:15 PM

hmmmm, good write.

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

2 posted 2003-10-18 09:50 AM

Well the only musicain I know being my Dad, I can't really relate to this one. I do, however, feel this way when I listen to certain music and adjust it to my emotion. I liked this one and bring me more.

NJS

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-10-23 12:25 PM

Yes...music definitely can have a profound effect on us,
and you've done a great job of expressing just that.
Enjoyed reading this.

~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-10-23 11:52 AM

Nice job. I really liked the message you were trying to get across. Which, by the way, you conveyed beautifully. Nice work.

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

5 posted 2003-10-23 11:53 AM

Nice job. I really liked the message you were trying to get across. Which, by the way, you conveyed beautifully. Nice work.

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

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