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Petey Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
Reward I pray to God Most every night To give me strength So I can fight. I pray to God To help me see There's still someone out there Left for me. I know I must Have faith to stand And not be crushed. Faith to know healing can't be rushed. The reward will be grand. But I can't stop. All the riches in the world Couldn't get me To stop loving this girl It won't end, Neither will my pain, Even though all my worry Is still in vain. She's too close to perfect. She keeps my eye and my guard On her and not my reward. My heart is strong But my will is weak. It's been too long For me to seek. For another person I could call my own, To lift me up And carry me home. But another love Would just break my heart, Making it too attached For a new love to start. Maybe, when all is said and done. There is no reward but a stronger heart A heart that is more loving. And harder it will hold on. Those who live by the sword, get shot by those who don't. |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
Oh My God! This Was AmazinG! Boy, that poem touched me! -This Poem is just ME! Except that it is a boy I love! Excellent write! |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
mazin'. I loved this. I could feel your pain, and all you r emotion. Very amazing write. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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loner187 Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 106Upstate New York |
Now this one is excellent, same feel as "End" but no parts seemed really forced. In fact, I like this a lot. And the rhyming works for it. I'm beginning to really like your work, nice job! The first step to recovery is to admit your addiction. So, here it is: |
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