Teen Poetry #7 |
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Petey Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
End Despite your past relationships, Regardless of your history, Even though you've been hurt before, I know love has brought you hardship. In my heart I feel guilty For makingyour heart feel sore. In spite of all these things I'm hoping you'll say you love me too. Even after so many rejections How can I expect Anyone to return my affections? Especially those who are my elect. The ones in the past, my reflections. No love can I detect. But I love you anyway Inside I hope you feel the same. We've seen our friends Brought to dead ends Love lead them blindly down the road of destruction. Their love they justify and defend, But still they let their standards bend. Maybe not in love we bring construction. In the past we've seen better days. Even though I want my feelings to send, It's time for this love to end. Those who live by the sword, get shot by those who don't. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Oh wow. I dont think you realize how mch i can relate to this.... i am going through like basically the same thing. I'm trying to get over this guy, but deep down i dont want to ![]() I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wow..gr88 poem really touched my heart soo deep..im going through this ,,,....... |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
Wow! This is almost . . . I normally don't like poems that have so many ryhmes but this blew me away! -Jamie Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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loner187 Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 106Upstate New York |
Uh, this is really deep...I can't relate at the moment, just getting into a relationship, but I know that there are plenty of people out there that feel your pain. Some parts I felt were a tad forced, but keep writing, man! You know how to express yourself well...good The first step to recovery is to admit your addiction. So, here it is: |
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