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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
To be free to fly to swim To go off on my own To hang on a limb To run and to play I hear what you say It's time to work From day to day No more time to play Or to be on my own It's time to conform To go with the flow To go against Would be suicide No one will care what happens No one will hear you cry you will fall with a constant fear Of hitting the ground That is so near The sting of insults hurled your way Like broken glass on your face Loseing sight of all you need Giving up on what you see The constant struggle to see the light The constant trouble to win this fight About to lose Down in the blues Fighting against the quicksand pull Trying to fly on broken wings Feeling myself getting weaker and weaker Seeing my future getting bleaker and bleaker To be free to fly to swim To go off on my own To hang on a limb To run and to play It's all a dream to me written october 6, 2003 "i am in troble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages then help me. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
hmmm...it had good rhythm...it was a bit simplistic for my taste though. it was ok though. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I like this a lot. I'm saving this if ya dont mind.* ~lol~ I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
life can suck at times, but it is what you make it, if no one is controlling or trying to.you express yourself well |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write!  Merry Christmas!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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