Teen Poetry #7 |
Complicated |
TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
This is love and it's not easy it can get pretty complicated sometimes, as you and I both know. I took my time, you hurried up and we never seemed to be able to meet halfway, yet I could feel your warmth surround me even when we were miles apart. It took us forever to get where we are, to establish some form of communication even if I had to chase you down for it. You always hid your feelings from me, leaving me to constantly wonder and second guess and to come to the conclusion, that maybe it was my fault. Love takes time and needs room to grow which is why we gave eachother space, and began to lead seperate lives. I would hear about you from others from your latest conquests to humiliating downfalls, my heart aching for the proper solution to this pain. But there were no answers here, only questions as to what went wrong and my insecurities did enough talking for the both of us. I was the day, you were the night for us, there was never an in between, no matter how many times we tried to make it work. Love and sacrifice go hand in hand which is more than I ever want to know and is more than you were willing to give. My heart isn't bitter, only bruised by all the sweet words you once said, which are now reserved for someone else. We had our brief time together and it was the happiest I've ever been, though this you will never find out. Because this is love and it isn't easy it can get pretty complicated sometimes and being in love alone hurts most of all and I, not you, will always be the one to know. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wow i know your pain -wolf |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
another pretty good poem ..but the only thing was you put everything altogether and i did not actually understand it much but "hey" its very good and it surely sounded like its from your heart..keep it up and keep writting.. with all my love and respect.. "believe in yourself you will successed" "I PROMISE YOU" |
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