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Just some thoughts... |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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Its amazing how much can change in one day. A moment when you think nothing could go wrong. A feeling with no doubt, A security and comfort, You thought you had. How one feeling can change everything. How a phone call can determine what to do next, How a song can be a horrible reminder of something once so good, How much a single tear can hurt, How fast something can be taken away from you, How you never even had it in the first place. How feelings can ruin a friendship, How you'll never know if you made the biggest mistake of your life, How fast the fear can be put into someone, When reality hits and changes everything, Why are we scared? Why do we hold on so tight? Why can't we let go? Some things never change Some things will never be the same... ((Did you ever look did you ever see that one person and the subtle way that they do these things and it hurts so much? Standing so close knowing that it kills me to breathe you in)) ::From Autumn To Ashes::" I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I really like this. It was amazing. You are really good. I think i will save this. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
and i forgot again...sorry. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Omg Alison...I know that I say this about alot of poems, but I can really relate to this poem. And it's true - just one phone call really can change your life and decide what happens next in your life. This poem was amazing, I'm gonna save it in my library...great job!!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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