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just irony |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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Just irony notes are scattered across the room ive been tearing through these papers for some time ive searched in my cabinets, drawers, under my bed for the words i knew were written. every letter was filled to the brink with love the words brought me up each day now i cant even read the notes the ink has begun running down the pages. funny how you wrote me in red pen because the wet ink now drips like . its staining my carpet and pooling on my bed, so i lay face down on my sheets for reflection. the crimson puddle is tinted with old memories that replay like black and white movies. i lose track of the time the flashbacks come more quickly. how many hours have passed? not that i would move even if i knew. soon the pictures fade to a solid black ive lost conscience and fallen into darkness. death follows closely like a child to its father but 's sting is far worse than a child's scream. did you somehow foresee this? you knew this was going to hapen, you prayed for it. what type of ink did you use? one filled with all the hurt and pain ive caused you. im sure that this is humorous to you and that you find it to be Just Irony. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That's very powerful. Old memories and words can be incredibly painful. Try not to dwell on them and you'll find strength in that, so one day they won't kill you. Hope things look up soon!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey this was realllly good keep postin ~sam~ |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks for all the feedback guys, i will continue to post for sure!! |
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sunshinemc Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 27 |
That was awesome! You have a good imagination ...hope things look up. <3 |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Very powerful. My favorite from you so far I think. Such an intense emotional read its almost draining the emotions are so vivid and pained. Such a perfectly painted canvas of words, lovely job ~Live and Laugh~ The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good onnnnnneeeeeeeeee. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
This was really powerful. I dont know if this poem is actually something that happened, but if it did, im sorry. You must have caused her al ot of pain huh. Till next time. ~kissa~ I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I'm glad to see this back up again.... ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i'm glad to see it back up too. actually she caused me alot of pain. darn s  |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
heh, just as powerful and touching the second time around... ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
You have captured pain in your words. You have made it easy to look through your mind, to wander through your brain and understand. Congratulations.  |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you, thank you. i only post here cuase of you guys. so thank you again. |
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