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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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at night i take my mask off lie in bed and think of what i've said that day i think and think about all the lies i've told all the people i've fooled why is this routine me smiling away and laughing when deep down i barely can stablise my anxiety my pain my growing pressure of disgust that fills me like liquid when i wake up and drains at night when i lie down i lay the mask beside my bed the mask i've put on that day and look at it with hate i sit and stare at its contents i lie down and rack my brains for any sign of truth anything i did that day that wasnt fake but i cant think because theres that liquid of pressure and disgust some that hasnt drained and i lie here drowining drowning in my thoughts drowning in me "When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..." |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
nice poem once you start lying ya cant stop huh. well all u gotta think is you started this, you can stop it. bi nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Get up and dry off in the...sun? maybe by the heater, burn the thoughts in the heat. Ashes to ashes, sust to dust and all that. Great write, as usual. Hollow. Courtney "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
True and searing. Who doesn't have a mask they wear? And who has never cloaked themselves in a protective lie? |
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