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Dark Poetry #4

Emptiness

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2003-12-03 11:17 PM

Empty is no longer an adjective
It is a noun
Since you have gone
I cease to feel emotions
When you wree still here I felt something
But I was past angry
Beyond hurt
And all last feelings of happiness were gone
But I did feel something
Something strong
Love
But you have left me
And it is over
So empty is no longer and adjective
It is a noun
I am empty
Empty has become me

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-12-04 10:56 AM

Emptiness is a poisen that will devour if you let it

cleopatra
New Member

since 2003-12-02

Posts 8

2 posted 2003-12-04 01:57 PM

its so sad but i like it a lot.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2003-12-05 05:40 PM

thank you
Brad: i amdire your work a lot. i know exactly what you mean when you say thta... it is easy to let emptiness devour all
Cleo: same goes for you... your work is amazing. and thank you again for your comment.

darkness

Kia Kaha

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-12-06 07:43 PM

Darkness?

this is brilliant:

Empty is no longer an adjective
It is a noun

so true My God so true
xxoo

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2003-12-07 03:29 PM

oh yes been here ..

well written and fascinating thoughts here. well done !

hugs june x

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