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Just Beyond the Skin |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148
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obsession mingles with history and you see me as I used to be a page out of the golden age when love reigned and time was the last barrier to be crossed over forgotten and nicely severed the connection that festers just beyond |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
~K~ dont know who the heck you are but you are speaking alot of people's heart and soul here you know where the places are hiding the things needing to be screamed again, awesome write |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Another one yay! Another great poem, K, thanks. Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I use to be able to write like this. But things have changed you kno. I like this better than the other one. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
this poem seams a little rushed... Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
it seems mysterious. and not a lot is told. |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
wow. just wow. im adding you to my library "I am the bringer of darkness. A shadow in the dark. I prey on the. The child of the lost souls. I hunger for the love of one unknown. The one to reve |
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