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What became of us?
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
What became of us? Plain talk at coffee, with infatuated eyes, across the table. Long hot baths, and your soft sighs, among the bubbles. Wedding nights, which had no end, when desires went, unspoken. Wedding vows, which stand today, among the promises, unbroken. So why are we? Why do we have to be? [This message has been edited by coyote (10-14-2003 11:58 PM).] |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
So much sadness in this. Not sure I totally understand it, but it does keep me thinking. Asia |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I, too, find it difficult to understand. I really have no idea what's being said, here. The words are so blatently remorseful, but without supplying a reason. From what is given, it would seem you should be happy! What are you getting at? "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
not sure where you are, but i know you would rather be at a different point...nice write "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Yeah, sometimes when things fall apart, countries, families, people, nerves.... it is pretty hard to make sense out of the pieces. Thanks for reading: Asian Rain Eromyna eor coyote "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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