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the worm in the orb |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Fleshy orb, and the worm who knew. Tunnels, dragged, browning with reminders. To dine, leaving the smooth, shinny outer casing alive and unknowing. Never feeding on the seeds, within. Not to be out-witted by self - selfishness, brought on by which it exists. The worm in the orb will surface. With only vacant thoughts, for us to fill. Like a cosmic prescription the worm will then know. Which seeds will stay, and which will go. If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (07-29-2004 08:46 AM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
not sure why this has no responses... people were probably puzzled by it. I thought it very descriptive. "Like a cosmic prescription" I loved that line. SO...great. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
It is a puzzled poem. I like the ending though. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
hey poe, its been a while, nice to see some of youre work in here... a little different than what i am used to seeing form you but i like it...it speaks of soemthing outside of the realm of conventional thought... i dig nice write my man Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hey Lexy, thanks for the boost with this one. It is a bit off the usual. You must be in-tuned. Xeonox, Thanks for stopping by and taking in a read. Think of the worm as the evil in life and the orb as the Earth. Hope this helps a bit. Thanks again. eor. good to here from you man, I'll send you an e-mail with re: to the site I have been hanging around. Check it out. Later man. Thanks to you all again, poe If nothing is something |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
hey poe, send my that site again it did not come through |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hey eor, here you go, www.saltydreamspoetryforum@ezboard.com/ I'm listed as ws. See you there. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
eor, place "salty dreams" in find. |
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