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Silent World |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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The door remains closed As it was long since you left And I’m still broken from the remains of your breath That shattered me to this dying state I am now in You say you will free me from it You say you can liberate it But you won’t say you love me like I love you And it kills me to think of what i do when you aren't here i can barely stand myself speak when the silence stretches deep into the night and through the days I look at your photograph and need to scream something within me pleads to run away from all this mess and tell the world I've had enough because all i ever see when i look at your picture is a face of bent promise and fake resentment, almost a longing to collide with realities deep emotions it looks like you have no place in the world, like you are too lost to understand or trust yourself and that makes me want to scream even louder because the screeching reality is that when you don't trust yourself how the hell am i meant to trust you? Or myself. I wish i could just explain this but all i do when i try is mumble words of white lies and i want you to see through them but you dont and im lost in my silent world once again *edited version "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pee in his/her pants - Brandon [This message has been edited by silhouetted (07-24-2004 10:32 PM).] |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Wow, I loved it Lor. It just all fitted together and....and, I can't say. I just really loved it. Saved, like all of your poems.... Love, Courts "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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