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The Blackness Around Me
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The Blackness Around Me |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Black I feel the black I feel darkness all around me Enclosing me, stifling me Hot breath of pending death The spectres return to haunt With visions that tease and taunt I feel like crying, Or laughing like a child With a frown, I hang my head down And know not whether I’m coming or going My senses take leave Yet somehow I see forever And it is grey Grey as today I’ve reached the point in life Where it is a longer way back Than where I am going But I am going; It is the only thing I am sure of |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Just poetry? This must be how many feel, when they've travelled very very far down life's road.  |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Nicely written, it had a certain simplicity to parts of it that helped added something to it, I can't explain really lol. I enjoyed it. |
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