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subjugate of intrigue |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Infantile in the pressing of What reflection can this be? And I’m sure of you And what happened to me Try me, but I don’t have a reason We are what we become Lost something in the making of Distances between my abominations I’ve split this sliver within my hand Simple in the being of What monster can this be? And I’m sure of you But, who did this to me? Slipped between some finger tips Cigarettes and assault burns Strangulate all vigilance I found in this Integrity is not a part of thrashing out Interpreting the difference between being alive And the simplicity of how I lay you inside… |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
hmm, dont know how i havent read you before.. you really really manipulate the reader's emotions... I feel this hmm, will be watching out for your writing from now on. nice to meet you  LOL |
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Defective Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 73Salisbury NC |
And once again I envy you for these beautiful words you write. Kristi |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Thank you both for your responces. Nice to meet you too. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
that ending was awesome |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I like the ending alot too. Writing endings seems to be something im good at, in my opinion anyways. Your response is, again, greatly appreciated. |
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