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Abyssmal rings |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
My thoughts are churning in my head. Twisting, colliding, incoherent. The anger bubbles up inside, A burning pain within my chest. My mind goes numb, like it’s disconnected. I have no control over my own hand. My face is calm, frozen. I build a wall around my heart. Bigger! Thicker! It doesn’t stop. I go through the motion Mechanically, a pretense. Put on a show, don’t let them suspect. Smile and nod like a puppet on a stage. Attached by invisible strings, Directed by invisible hands. My own walls close around me, Breathing becomes hard. It feels like I’m suffocation, My world smothering me. My vision goes dark I’m falling, falling. Spiraling downward, forever down Into the black abyss of my mind. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
sheer brilliance i love it you explain things so well and the imagery is awesome loved the last line LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pee in his/her pants - Brandon |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
This is one that isn't a song for the band, just me being pissed. Yet again, glad you like it. This is one that I have published. |
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