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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
You look to me with pleading eyes and i wish i could explain it your hands search for mine and my eyes flicker to the ground I cant stare into the eyes of my closest friend in case I reveal more about myself I wish I could confide in you but I cant trust you, let alone myself I wish you could understand but I geuss that would be asking a little too much of you sometimes I wish my act was better and I never looked as depressed as I feel So I smile broadly and laugh my perfect laugh "Nothings wrong" I say and you look concerned before asking for reassurance I nod my head and shrug why would something be wrong with me I am, after all, star student social butterfly perfect daughter fun sister loving girlfriend self-hating twisted deranged girl nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
You sound a lot like me...except for the whole being a girl thing.... |
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Theory Junior Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 23N. CA. USA |
nice write |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I know, love, I know. Courts, Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
i really loved that one. something about your poems make me nod all the way though them. a lot of them make me feel so sad and lost and i admire the feeling you bring through them. I can tell that poem was true about you. True to what you think of yourself. And though i cant change the way you think about life, and though i never see you anymore, please never forget this soph. I, and so many other people around you, love you to bits. I can't see my life without what you've made me sophie. I cant thank you more. I just want you to know this okay? LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pe is his/her pants - Brandon B |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Ok both of you, listen up. You are the ones who got me into writing, especially poetry and...mainly dark poetry. Last year was one of the best years of my life and I have to admit I've been pretty down lately, but as I told u Soph, I'm happy being me...and...I don't know, I just wanted to thank you guys. For being there to talk to. Thanks. *Hugs* Hollow. (Hey Soph, Lor is gonna stay at my place this week sometime, just wondering if you wanna be there too.) "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
thnx dudes. i appreciate it. yea id like to be there courts. jst ask lor for my number. dnt exactly wanna post it here. i no uve been like dat courts and im glad you can talk to me. i cant talk to ppl wen i feel like dat so im rly glad that u feel comfortable talkin to me. you no hu to call, gorgeus! thnx lor for wat u wrote. i forget that and sorta look past it i geuss yea i dunno darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
hey there darkness this is such an amazing poem. i know exactly what your going thru coz well every on does, but the way you put your feelings down on paper, well its amazing..... you have such amazing talent im getting more and more jealous with every poem i read of yours, they are so real, full of emotion, down to earth, and flow perfectly... keep up the REAL writing girl. always around for a chat Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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