Dark Poetry #4 |
Poverty and Passion |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
There's just something about it I know they don't appreciate Desire too strong to ignore Shelter from a can For the one I love It hurts to think it I love to breathe it Just want to hold it Total love and conquer it My vision has changed a bit Blurry to everything else God soars over me in navigational love Simply just desire Gentle breaths of fire from my heart Even if I'm down to nothing.... No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
I had to read over this a few times and I think I get it now. Very interesting. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I wish I had that kind of comfort in sprituality... sadly it defies me. good write...probably not your best. But still good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
ok |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey you...I can agree slightly that it's not your best work...but it makes me want to know what you are talking about, I'm a little distracted right now but it will come to me eventually anywho, keep writing. no matter what we say. keep writing. - Bon Running out of pain |
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